Monday, April 6, 2015


                                                                                                                               

                                                 

                                              Cool is cool...                       


 


            Cool is not seeking negative attention from others.First, when teenagers and young adults attempt to gain attention from recording themselves fighting, they think it makes them cool. However, knowing how to and when to defend yourself is what makes a person cool. Secondly, when going out to party, recording yourself under the influences of does not make a person cool. Rather what makes a person cool is drinking responsibly. Knowing when to stop and when not to drive. It is not cool taking a life because someone decided taking too many shots of liquor was cool.
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  1. UnknownApril 7, 2015 at 8:00 AM

    i agree how others think its cool to do things that they shouldnt do, it will eventually not make them look "cool" at all, but more like dumb and as a type of low life person.

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  2. UnknownApril 7, 2015 at 1:18 PM

    I respect your perspective in terms of the content. As for the organization,when I read your paragraph, I couldn't separate between the major and minor supports. You seem to have good and relevant examples, but I suggest it would be clearer if you mention each group of examples under one major support. :))

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